Tuesday, February 5, 2008

Blog 3 - Pigs, We Want Meat !!!

"SWOOSH!" the sound of tendril makes as i run past the tree's looking for pigs, wanting meat. All i can think is how we need and want meat, we've grown tired of the fruit, time for some real cookin' once i can catch a pig. If only i had some barb then i could really get the pig this dumb stick isn't sharp enough. " Snort,Snort" the pig jets off in a heavily rush. Looking bewildered i think, how did it know i was here, i need some green to hide myself in the forest. "I'm done for today," as i scurry back to the beach.


Ralph approaches me with this furtive look, like i did something wrong, i was just doin' me job. I see him and Simon put up some huts, thats good the little ones need a place to sleep at night. "Help us build huts, your not doing much." says Ralph. How am i not doin' much I'm huntin' for this place i'm doin' alot for it. Im inscrutable, i've been workin' all day how dare he. "I'm goin' to take a bath then i'm done for the night, if suns still out im gonna' try and hunt more pig."

The beach water is glimmering while i watch the little ones, play amongst the moonlight. As i walk to the huts the festoon swings while the soft gentle night air brushes it across the land. There goes piggy the fatty boy, his counsel idea is so stupid. If i was leader this place would be way better. The fatty probably feels oppressive he should he's so annoying.

If i was leader this island would be way better, i would make the little ones hunt. While the weak ones build the huts, i would be so flaunt, everyone probably wouldn't be able to stand it. This place needs a strong leader not some wimp named Ralph, I'm gonna be leader one day and those chumps will see!

1 comment:

Leyla said...

DJ,

I LIKE THE TITLE!!! "Pigs, we want meat!!!" hmm... well I guess it reflects that there turning savage. I also like the ODOMADOPIA (I probubly didn't spell that right) You have got alot of conversation in there, it's nice and long too. I also like this sentence "This place needs a strong leader not some wimp named Ralph," Looks like Jack is quite the diva and a bit self absorvebed. It's diffrent then all the others who just say Jacks a meanie, but you show him as a bit of a "vain" character. Good job. ^_^
-Leyla