Thursday, February 28, 2008

Blog 11 - " Just a Game..?"

What is this madness, why is half of the forest on fire, why are there little boys running with spears. What is happening i hear the ululation everywhere boys making noises. There are defiantly no adults on this island, because otherwise they wouldn't have set it on fire. What could they possibly eat if the island is on fire, what sense are the boys trying to make. This cant be just a game, i wander how many kids are actually serious. I try and visualize how people can think this is just a game but why would i believe a bunch of little kids. There is no way this is just a game. Its hard to elaborate whats actually going on in this island. I can imagine little kids cowered up in corners being scared to play this game, i would be scared, however I'm not a boy. How can British boys stoop this low, how can British boys go to savagery, i know they were taught better then that. It looks like theres millions of smoke clouds on one half of the island. I can hear ululation from the boys in the jungle. This island is going to burn down, i can see it now. I'm pretty sure the boys have been here for months, that Ralph looks dirty and burnt and hurt, he needs serious medical help. I heave the door open of my submarine and load the boys in. Listening to all there stories. How disappointing British School Boys, are so violent. I would expect this from a country born on savagery but not England. 2 dead boys, thats sad. Some of the kids would murder and attempt to murder the other boys. They shouldn't have been fearing the beast but fearing each other. Look at how they treat each other. I hope for a better future for these boys, hopefully they can have a new life and some of them wont be as savage as they were on this island.

1 comment:

Yessika's Lord of the flies said...

DJ
your blog was really good the only thing is some parts of the grammar that you need to go over it for example some of the I's need to be upper case.