Simon. I think what I have done. No it was an accident; I didn't mean to do it. We were scared, as I shudder. That was scary, the song and the dance and the rain and everything. He shouldn't have been on the floor batty like that clambering around like that. I don't think we should get any blame for that, it was Jack's fault for making us scared of such a thing. I can’t believe we all contributed to something that bad, but I didn't do anything, it was an accident I was scared. Ralph and I kind of agreed to make it so we left early; I use to gesticulate my glasses a lot. As Ralph and I talked to Sam'nEric we knew they were also there, nobody wants to admit to killing Simon, what a tragedy we did him in. No, the hunters did him in chanting that bloody song.
Well, what Jack did was not acceptable. How could he take my glasses, my only eyes, and their gone? Now I can’t see, well it all happened that night. We saw the figures of the hunters, there were 3. They attacked at night, while I was smothered by my ass-mar and they made me really scared, I could hardly breathe. I thought they were going to take the conch, but they took something more valuable my glasses. I want to stifle Jack and his hunters, if I was stronger I would take him down and get my glasses back, Oh Ralph what am I to do. Well now I can’t see, I'm blind, what good use is a blind man huh. Its phosphorescence now, I can’t see a thing and I’m cold as bloody crabs. What am I to do? What am I to do?
Tuesday, February 26, 2008
Blog 9 - Nightmares Nearly Nowhere.
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2 comments:
DJ,
You used some of the vocab words incorrectly such as "phosphorescence" and "gesticulate." Your character Piggy is very convincing in his argument about why Simon's death is not his fault. Also you really show how helpless Piggy feels without his glasses and how he makes excuses for not being able to fight Jack. Good job!
Kira
DJ-
I could tell from your journal that Piggy has a strong perspective to this scenario. Somethings that I caught was that you made a few grammar mistakes and use of words. One thing that I don't really get is..."I use to gesticulate my glasses a lot." How can you gesticulate your glasses? Maybe I'm reading it wrong but it doesn't make very much sense to me. Otherwise, it was very good. Great job!
-sky
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