Monday, February 25, 2008

Blog 8 - Syco Simon?

As i awake from the dream i had and the talk with the Lord Of The Flies. He says if i go to the boys they will do me in, basically kill me, they want to have fun on this island. Hmm no fire by the beach maybe they just transfered beaches to that new one. I tremulous think of Jack and how he was so easily able to hurt that kid Robert. I try not to think much about my crazy dream and talk with the lord of the flies.

I continue up the mountain to try and find this "Beast" moving at steadfast pace. I take a close look at the features, my my it's just a poor dead human, probably died from the war and parachute makes it look like wings. I should tell the others, lets see the fire is over there so i better make it quick before the rain comes.

Almost there as i finish coming through the forest, its raining just about, i hear a lot of noise going on. I emerge from the jungle, getting attacked for some weird reason.What corruption, the hunters are attacking me out of being corrupt. What did i ever do to deserve this, "The beast is just a parachute man" i try and say with my last breath. Jack really has gone crazy with this hunter ideal.

"Swoosh,Swoosh." Resting in peace, in the ocean, nature. They killed and betrayed me for no reason, now i lay resting in the ocean dead. As the rain water trickles into the ocean where i now lay resting, i think about how the Lord Of The Flies told me i was going to die, and said they would have fun, i guess they got want they want.

2 comments:

kkaufman said...

DJ,
In the beginning I would like you to write a little bit more details about what Simon is thinking about his conversation with the Lord of the Flies. Your ending was great, having Simon talk about what happened to him and now he's dead.
Kira

Sky said...

DJ-

Your journal is very good. But you misspelled "psycho" it's not "syco." That's one thing. Also again, there is a few spelling and grammar mistakes that you might want to check. Like Kira said, I would like you to elaborate on the conversation that Simon had with the Lord of the Flies. It would give more information and it would make it more interesting then it already is. I liked the ending a lot too. Great job!
-sky