We dont know what to say... First his glasses were stolen and now he's dead and were forced to join his murderers. It all happened that dreadful night. Jack and his hunters attacked me and my brother. They stole Piggy's glasses in an attempt for cooking fire. It is'nt fair we shouldve shared the fire, but they came and stol piggy's glasses. Makin' him blind, thats no fair. We should've tried protectin' piggy instead of lettin' jack steal his glasses like that.
The trip to castle rock was scary, My brother and I were scared, Yeah Scared. We where scared of hunters comin' from no where and attackin' us, we where scared alright, scared like never before, we never believed in no beast, however we did believe in some hunta's comin' from the bushes and attacking us. Especially with only four people, Ralph,Piggy,and Us.
The struggle we saw was crazy, Jack and Ralph were fighting, we were voting for Ralph of course, an island with jack as leader would be bloody terrible. Ralph started callin' him a thief and he took it offensive big time. Next thing we knew Piggy was dead, and Ralph started Runnin' after Jack took us as prisoners.
We saw piggy die, it was terrible, Roger is a bloody murderer. How could he kill someone who only wanted peace, and nothin' else. Just peace nothin' but peace. Wanted his glasses back and thats all. Poor piggy, his brains spilled all over the rock then got washed away by the ocean. We need piggy without him we wont have good ideas anymore everyone will be savage.
When they took us as prisoners we were hurt. We didn't want to work for Jack but it was either that or die. He wasn't afraid to kill people, because he was so fast to kill piggy and Simon, all he had to do was tell people the beast was not kill able and they would follow him. I hate that Jack and that Roger there evil people.
The trip to castle rock was scary, My brother and I were scared, Yeah Scared. We where scared of hunters comin' from no where and attackin' us, we where scared alright, scared like never before, we never believed in no beast, however we did believe in some hunta's comin' from the bushes and attacking us. Especially with only four people, Ralph,Piggy,and Us.
The struggle we saw was crazy, Jack and Ralph were fighting, we were voting for Ralph of course, an island with jack as leader would be bloody terrible. Ralph started callin' him a thief and he took it offensive big time. Next thing we knew Piggy was dead, and Ralph started Runnin' after Jack took us as prisoners.
We saw piggy die, it was terrible, Roger is a bloody murderer. How could he kill someone who only wanted peace, and nothin' else. Just peace nothin' but peace. Wanted his glasses back and thats all. Poor piggy, his brains spilled all over the rock then got washed away by the ocean. We need piggy without him we wont have good ideas anymore everyone will be savage.
When they took us as prisoners we were hurt. We didn't want to work for Jack but it was either that or die. He wasn't afraid to kill people, because he was so fast to kill piggy and Simon, all he had to do was tell people the beast was not kill able and they would follow him. I hate that Jack and that Roger there evil people.
3 comments:
DJ,
I love how you created a special way of talking for Sam and Eric. Very clever. Your paragraph about Piggy's death is great because you not only describe it but you let the reader know through Sam and Eric what the terrible consequences are (" without him we won't have good ideas anymore. Everyone will be savage.")
Kira
DJ-
I agree with Kira, I really liked the way you had them talk. I can totally imagine them talking like that. I especially liked this sentence..."The struggle we saw was crazy, Jack and Ralph were fighting, we were voting for Ralph of course, an island with jack as leader would be bloody" I liked how you added bloody in because that is actually how they talk. One thing that I would like you to look for is you grammar and making sure that names have uppercase letters. But otherwise, I thought it was a very good journal entry that expressed the feelings of Samneric.
-sky
DJ,
I really liked your blog I loved the way that you were talking. YOU actually made me get into the story . and how they know that what jack and his troops are doing was wrong :).
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