Thursday, January 24, 2008

Blog 1 - Are we alone?

As i wake from that nightmare of Jumbling thoughts, i think to myself where am i? All i can seem to remember is that giant fireball that use to be the front of the plane. Is the pilot gone? What happened to any of the other people? Am i alone? I feel my body Quivering, shaking in the fear that i would never see any of my friends or family again. Will i just die on this island?

I didn't pay much attention to the
Decorous island, filled with a lot of beautiful flowers, and fruit that matched so perfectly. The beach im on is sandy but the water isn't cold. I cant keep the thought out of my mind about what might have happened to everyone. I can see a mountain far off but not much more then that. I take a Vain look at myself wandering what i should do. I was never the smartest in my survival classes 101, but i need to find some food first.

I cross a small Lagoon to reach a small tree filled with oranges. I Clamber up the tree using both my hands and feet going at a steadily pace. If im going to survive on this island im going to need a lot of resources. I speculate the rest of the island while on the tree, at that moment i hear a Grating noise that was also quite Strident.

I Devour the fruit quickly as i start to run towards the noise. I take a look at my Pallor skin, im not feeling so good but not much i can do on this island. I'm "NOT ALONE!" i scream in my head ! I arrive at the noise to find a group of boys, creating a Clamor noise.

As another boy Interposes and says why don't we take a vote.I had a strong Indignation in the Ralph kid, i think we need a strong leader as i raised my hand. That jack kid is older then Ralph and stronger making a fit leader. The ralph kid won the vote, i know im gonna hate the time i spend here with these ignorant fellows.

1 comment:

srosenstock said...

As i wake from that nightmare of Jumbling thoughts, i think to myself where am i? All i can seem to remember is that giant fireball that use to be the front of the plane. Is the pilot gone? What happened to any of the other people? Am i alone? I feel my body Quivering, shaking in the fear that i would never see any of my friends or family again. Will i just die on this island?


DJ,
The way that you used questions in the first paragraph really drew me in to your story. When you said, "Will I just die on this island?" It made me question more things about the story. I also liked how you used the word "jumbling". When you said you "wake from a nightmare of jumbling thoughts" I thought that was a good way to use the word.